Sunday, July 03, 2011

Gopal Das Neeraj ke kuchh pasandeeda 'Muktak'

Gopal Das Neeraj ki kavitaon aur anki kuch pasandida gajalon ko pahle bhi pesh kar chuka hoon. par Neeraj ka kavya sansaar unki kavitaon aur ghazalon tak hi seemit nahin hai. urdu rubaaiyon ke andaaj men unhonne jo chand panktiyan likhin unhonne usako 'muktak' ka nam diya. aur kya kamaal ke muktak likhe hain Gopal Das Neeraj ji ne..

prasiddh kavya sameekshak sherajng garg ne Neeraj ke muktakon ki lokapriyata ke baare men likhte hain..

Neeraj ke muktak behisaab saraahe ge. iska ek kaaran Neeraj ki mili juli ganga jamuni bhasha thi. jise samajhne ke liye shabdakosh ulatne ki jaroorat nahin thi. ismen hindi ka sanskar tha to urdu ki zindadili in donon khoobiyon ke saath Neeraj ke andaje bayan ne apana hunar dikhaya aur unake muktak bhi geetikaon ke samaan yaadgaar aur marmasparshi ban ge.

aaj Neeraj ke likhe apane pasandida muktakon se aapaka parichay karata hoon. aasha hai ye aap ko bhi utne hi pasand aaenge jitane mujhe aate hain...


(1)
kafan badha to kis liye nazar too dabadaba gai?
singar kyon saham gaya bahaar kyon laja gai?
n janm kuch n mrityu kuch bas itani sirf baat hai ‌
kisi ki aankh khul gai, kisi ko nind aa gai.

(2)
khushi jisane khoji vah dhan le ke lauta,
hansi jisane khoji chaman le ke lauta,
magar pyar ko khojane jo chala vah
n tan le ke lauta, n man le ke lauta.

(3)
rat idhar dhalti to din udhar nikalta hai
koi yahan rukta to koi vahan chalta hai
deep au patnge men fark sirf itana hai
ek jalke bujhta hai, ek bujhake jalta hai

(4)
ban ge hukkaam ve sab joki beimaan the,
ho ge lidar ki dum jo kal talak darabaan the,
mere malik ! aur bhi to sab hain sukhi tere yahan,
sirf ve hi hain dukhi jo kuch n bas insan the.

(5)
chhedane par maun bhi vachal ho jata hai, dost !
tootne par aaina bhi kaal ho jata hai dost
mat karo jyada havan tum aadami ke khoon ka
jalke kala koyla bhi lal ho jata hai dost !

chalte chalte gopal das Neeraj dvara apani kavya rachanaaon par likhi baat uddhrit karana chahoonga
jab likhne ke liye likha jata hai tab jo kuch likha jata hai usaka nam hai gadya. par jab likhe bina n raha jaaye aur jo khud khud likh jaaye to usaka nam hai kavita. mere jeevan men kavita likhi nahin gai. khud likh likh gai hai, aise hi jaise pahadon par nirjhar aur foolon par oos ki kahani.